Becca and Charlotte review

This week we have been writing a pitch to poswade persuade Liz, Jim and Mrs Dale to Choose the notebook and put the winning design on. On Thursday the 24th of may 2012, we pitched to Liz she said that our advert was "amazing" and the music really fitted in on what the advert was trying to say visually. She said we were the first people to mention "research." This is an example of one of the paragraphs we created. Paragraph 1: We feel that a notebook will prove to be a best seller in your store as it can be made available in a range of sizes. From our research, we've found A4 and A7 the most popular choice of size, therefore we suggest it would be a good staring point to first of all manufacture these sizes and see how sales go from there.